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Foolish Mistake!
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Foolish Mistake! |
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Lynn Member
since 1999-09-20
Posts 316Jasper, Alabama U.S.A. |
I've wondered the past three months if my thoughts were true. I just found out today and I don't know how to tell you. The words just won't form to tell you what I need to say. I don't know when, or if I should tell you because I don't won't to ruin your day. All I wonder know, is why was I so dumb. Why didn't I say no that night? If the things that happened hadn't everything would be alright. But it happened and there's no going back I'll finally learn from my mistake. It's just funny all of a sudden, a baby's all it takes..... If time cannot heal your pain, you can always cry on my shoulder. ~Jenn~ |
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Compgirl Member
since 2000-02-19
Posts 85USA |
Speachless here..ahhh..speachless... |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
If your going to raise this child ... you might consider getting rid of this poem ... just a thought ...  Rex}>{{{{o> |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
I'm not sure calling a baby a 'mistake' is a good idea. Sometimes that word sticks...you may say it once or twice in the child's developmental years and it will stick..I can't imagine going through life thinking I was nothing but a mistake!!! The poem is good..says what you want to say..... |
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