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Lone Ranger Member
since 2000-04-16
Posts 92Salvador , Bahia , Brazil |
Reverie I'm thinking to myself When I have a reverie It shows me what I am And all I want to be I close my eyes And I start having a dream But there comes another one Following the stream Once I dreamt of love Of tears , of joy I felt that all my life I was too much coy On my best dreams Courage is a bliss But in my heart All I wanted was a kiss Only in the dreams Is that I can truly be free It was always thus And always thus will be "Only in the dreams , is that man can truly be free It was always thus and always thus will be" Prof. Keating Dead Poets Society |
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netswan Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369Washington |
Lone Ranger -- such an insightful poem. More people need to do a self analogy and know themselves so well. Well Written - and thanks for sharing! netswan |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Nicely written. Liked your poem. |
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Lone Ranger Member
since 2000-04-16
Posts 92Salvador , Bahia , Brazil |
Thank you Mike & Netswan! That one really came from the heart , as all others... And I think that everyone should do a self analogy from time to time they might find out things they never thought the knew... "Only in the dreams , is that man can truly be free It was always thus and always thus will be" Prof. Keating Dead Poets Society |
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First__Knight Senior Member
since 1999-11-08
Posts 678 |
Depth and truth filled so well in your words here....Well done  A man does not love a woman because she is beautiful...But she is beautiful because he loves her. |
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