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0 posted 2000-04-18 05:43 PM


The Love

Permit me, sir, the pleasure to place myself
tranquilly by your side, my love,
to inhale your quintessence of soul,
and marvel at your spirit,
that which allows me to feel whole.

Idle I’ll not be, but bask in your words,
refraining from speech myself, so
the timbre of your voice will overtake
me, caressing my heart and mind,
as possession of my soul you make.

Naught that I need you, I do abhor
the need of others, but that I desire you,
and I would share you with no other,
as you would not share me;
nay, neither we want to love another.

Take up now to you the twenty years
and face me, seeing through the tears,
the younger woman ‘twas once I,
and will ne’er be again, but through my mind
that vision of womanhood you first did find.

And so, should twenty years more come to pass,
would you know in heart that this lass
is only young then in your view
but know now, and always, in her heart
there will only remain memory of you.


18 April, 2000
©KRJ




 Sunshine
Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow


© Copyright 2000 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2000-04-18 06:35 PM


Nicely written Sunshine. A wonderful poem.
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2 posted 2000-04-19 06:56 AM


Thank you Mike...
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3 posted 2000-04-19 07:01 AM


Love knows no age, Sunshine.  It is simply forever when found true in heart... you will always be young in Love's eyes.


Michael

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4 posted 2000-04-19 07:14 AM


Karilea~
Your muse is whispering beautiful
thoughts in this piece.
That's being in touch with deeper self.
Lovely work.
~*Marge*~


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5 posted 2000-04-19 08:42 AM


Lovely indeed, Sun .........
Beautiful writing here .....

 "This is where you will win the battle .... in the playhouse of your mind."
Maxwell Maltz

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6 posted 2000-04-19 09:29 AM


Michael, we can only hope, can't we...

Marge, no struggle to write this, as this is what I've been trying to do for some time, and it finally started seeping through...thanks...

Pepper, thanks as always...

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7 posted 2000-04-20 09:15 AM


Hi Sunshine,

I am so glad I did not miss this one it is so beautiful, very beautiful, thank you for sharing.

Cerenity

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8 posted 2000-04-20 09:27 AM


The beauty in ones heart never ages.
Nice writing Sunshine.

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9 posted 2000-04-20 09:39 AM


Cerenity, Danny, thank you for your lovely comments...
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