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FairyEyes
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since 2000-04-17
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0 posted 2000-04-18 05:22 PM



Lazy Ideas buzz
like sundrunk flies
      around my head; taunting me.
But just like the elusive shadows
   they slip away in time to laugh
Just before I grasp them
  I taste a glimpse
of what
     could be.


 ~If eyes were made for seeing, then Beauty is its own excuse for Being~
RW Emerson
" I'll paint you mornings of gold, Ill spin you valentine evenings..." *JARETH*


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Mike
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since 1999-06-19
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1 posted 2000-04-18 06:23 PM


Nicely written.  Enjoyed.
netswan
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since 2000-03-28
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2 posted 2000-04-18 06:27 PM


Hi FairyEyes welcome to the forum.

Clever little poem you have submitted here.
I really like it!

netswan

Rex Allen McCoy
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since 2000-01-30
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Sippin a Timmy's in London
3 posted 2000-04-19 01:09 AM


your poem is very good
small but packs a lot of punch
welcome to passions

Rex}>{{{{o>

Compgirl
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since 2000-02-19
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4 posted 2000-04-19 01:13 AM


I enjoyed the reading!!!
Cerenity
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since 2000-02-16
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5 posted 2000-04-20 08:38 AM


Hi FairyEyes,

This happens to me and the could-be's drive me crazy,
Welcome to passions,

Cerenity

Poet deVine
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6 posted 2000-04-20 09:53 AM


Been there many times! Welcome to our family..please check your email for a special message!  
Joannak
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7 posted 2000-04-20 11:18 AM


Oh yes, FairyEyes, I do know the feeling as well, lol.  I have learned to keep pen and paper in hand wherever I go, trying to grasp those elusive ideas myself.  Enjoyed this much.

Joanna


 What better way to become immortal than to wake up each day and write? Ray Bradbury



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