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The Jackal
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since 1999-08-13
Posts 426
Springfield, Massachusetts U.S.A

0 posted 2000-04-18 02:45 PM


hollow could describe
never felt so empty everywhere
inside..and like the ridicule
may they always serve.. the only question
how do you live beneath your nerve
leaving is always open..for the things
no longer protected by lies
pray the broken bones of spite
help me find a home tonight..



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Janet Marie
Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

1 posted 2000-04-18 08:12 PM


hey jac...
there is something about your words...they always get to me...this one is excellent...
I like the way your poetic mind works.*S*
take care, jm

"hollow could describe"
very cool line...


 Well the sun sets gently on your shoulders
And it makes me want to touch you there.
And the light in your eyes makes me feel
Like there's something much better out there
Something kind...
And I know someday I might be looking around
Trying to find some purpose
Well purpose it can't be that hard to find
As long as I've got the wind...
The wind and your love to carry me.
vertical horizon



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