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The best in me
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The best in me |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
Thie piece is a little personal as it describes me wanting to be the best poet ever because I'm a very competitive person that prides on being the best at something. Ever since I was a youngster, I wanted to be sucessful, live a life of happiness, and a life that's distressful. I know that in order to get the best in me, I have to reach down deep and ignite the fire that burns my yearning desires. I know that I can't do it all by myself so I ask God for his help. With his guidance, I will find the courage and strength, to suceed at life's greatest lengths. Soon, God's help will cease because ultimately, it's up to me, get the best out of me. I've always believed very deeply, that it's always been my destiny, to get the best out of me because, I've always wanted to be number one but it ain't easy when there's a million other gifted poets under the sun. I want to be the best poet ever but I know that I have to get my mind and heart together because in order for me to achieve I have to really dig deep in order to getr the best out of me. My poems are a complete work of art as I give a 100% with all my heart. My poetry concepts are well-thoughtout and executed as my creativity and visualization can never be disputed. But in order for me to be the best, I have to dig deep in my treasure chest so that I can achieve what I always wanted to be and that's the truly best in me. Nathan |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thats right Nate we all have to dig into our treasure chests...and dig out that creativity God has blessed us with..and shape it to our satisfaction. Keep on writing you have it flowing. James |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
Sounds like you know exactly what you're doing Nate...  Very powerful piece you've written here, thanks for the peek inside!!  Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Nate~ I always enjoy your 'heart'. We all have to dig deeply to find that which will shine for us. I write for the sheer pleasure that it gives me to share it with others. I have no further aspirations than that. My 'best' is the pouring of my heart upon a page that may reach out and touch someone else. When I touch someone else, it touches me. I like to think that we see the 'best' of every poet in the thoughts from their hearts. Keep aspiring ... reaching in ... and pouring out. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
You're on your way, Nate! Don't ever give up trying to be the best you can be! Denise |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
Thank you James for the nice comments. Thank you Devina for the nice comments. Thank you Marge for your generosity and your lenghthy posts. Thank you Denise for your sweet comments. Nathan |
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