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One Perfect Day

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hsystems
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0 posted 04-18-2000 01:35 PM       View Profile for hsystems   Email hsystems   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit hsystems's Home Page   View IP for hsystems

           One Perfect Day

One perfect day, I came to know
The meaning of true bliss,
While drinking fresh-brewed coffee
That was sweetened by your kiss.
Outside, the air was wintry cold,
But I was snug and warm:
The radiant warmth of summertime
I felt, within your arms.

One perfect day, I felt the touch
Of something sweet and rare,
As, with my gentle, loving hands,
I washed your silken hair.
And, as I gazed upon your face,
So happy and so calm,
I marveled at the beauty
That I held within my palm.

One perfect day, I caught a glimpse
Of Heaven, up above,
While walking hand in hand with you -
The woman that I love.
The sweet sensation of your touch
Drove all my cares away,
And filled me with tranquility
Upon that perfect day.

-Troy J. Hoecherl-

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1 posted 04-18-2000 01:42 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth   Email Elizabeth   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Elizabeth's Home Page   View IP for Elizabeth

A beauty as usual! The imagery is very well done and appeals to so many of the senses. Lovely, lovely work!

Elizabeth


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Nan
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2 posted 04-18-2000 01:44 PM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

...And this is a perfect poem... It's a wonderfully romantic theme, and finely crafted.  You've got one lucky lady there, Troy...
Nate Dogg
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3 posted 04-18-2000 01:48 PM       View Profile for Nate Dogg   Email Nate Dogg   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nate Dogg's Home Page   View IP for Nate Dogg

This piece is very beautiful Troy! Great work!!

 Nathan
hsystems
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4 posted 04-18-2000 02:12 PM       View Profile for hsystems   Email hsystems   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hsystems's Home Page   View IP for hsystems

Elizabeth - why, thank you!  Is that rose for me?  LOL!  I'm just kidding, but it IS a little-known fact that many of us men like flowers.  

Nan - (Blushing) Thanks, but I am the lucky one - she's an Angel, through and through!  

Nate Dogg - Thanks so much!  


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Corazon
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wow, very nice, and yep lucky pair you two make....a beautiful one at that  
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6 posted 04-18-2000 04:31 PM       View Profile for Lost Dreamer   Email Lost Dreamer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lost Dreamer

This poem is a beautiful tribute to the one you love, what a talent you have.  
David2
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Troy,
    Very well written and easy to read, I bet your love melted when she saw it. Great work.
       David2
doreen peri
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What a lucky lady....  

You are both truly blessed.
bboog
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Troy,
   This one's a keeper. No changes needed.
best regards,
bboog
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Troy,
See I told you...better and better every post. Keep 'em coming.

Jeffrey
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hsystems,
Good verse, good thoughts, good poem.
hsystems
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12 posted 04-19-2000 11:37 AM       View Profile for hsystems   Email hsystems   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hsystems's Home Page   View IP for hsystems

Thank you all for your kind words!  Your encouraging comments make my day!


Troy

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pen of passion
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Wow! one perfect poem.
Lone Wolf
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Troy,
This is perfect!!!  Very well written.  I am happy you found love on that perfect day, my friend.  Talk to you soon!!  


 Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end.
--Michael W. Smith
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15 posted 04-20-2000 10:45 AM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

One more time for "A Perfect Day"...
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16 posted 10-26-2000 07:43 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth   Email Elizabeth   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Elizabeth's Home Page   View IP for Elizabeth

And now another time for it! I miss your work around here, Troy.  

Elizabeth


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Suum cuique.
~Elizabeth


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17 posted 11-26-2000 12:36 AM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

One perfect day Troy wrote a beautiful poem for all eyes to see...James
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