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Joannak
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0 posted 2000-04-18 01:28 PM


I look with my heart.
Happiness for me, to see
your green eyes, flashing.

jk


 What better way to become immortal than to wake up each day and write? Ray Bradbury


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Nate Dogg
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1 posted 2000-04-18 01:53 PM


Short and precise. Good work!!

 Nathan

Sunshine
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2 posted 2000-04-18 01:56 PM


Any person with green eyes will be happy today [I know I am!]  Thanks, good job!
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3 posted 2000-04-18 09:59 PM


Joanna~
Yep ... this is a GOOD green-eyed beauty !
*bats green eyes*
Sunshine's right ....
we're just feeling mighty proud and happy !
~*Marge*~


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mariee66
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4 posted 2000-04-18 10:24 PM


This is G-G-r-r-reat!
Nice job...I am smiling  


[This message has been edited by mariee66 (edited 04-18-2000).]

INclan
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5 posted 2000-04-19 12:19 PM


Joanna,

A provacative Haiku. There is indeed something about green eyes.  I bet you cheer for Notre Dame, don't you?

GO MICHIGAN! ! !

INclan

Compgirl
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6 posted 2000-04-19 12:23 PM


I am wishing my eyes were green..
Joannak
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7 posted 2000-04-19 09:29 PM


Thanks for responding, poets.

Nate, I love the precision of haiku, thanks.
Sunshine and Marge, green-eyed people are the happiest people I know, you two are so lucky!
Thanks, Marie, I enjoy reading your work as well.
Compgirl, I wish my eyes were green also, but I am happy with my blues.

And INclan, yes, I do have IRISH eyes, and I believe ND beat Michigan recently, did they not?

Thanks all,

Joanna


 What better way to become immortal than to wake up each day and write? Ray Bradbury



kaile
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8 posted 2000-04-19 11:44 PM


lovely attempt again....i just remembered from my Enid Blyton's days that folks with green eyes are rumoured to be of the fairy descend... ")

BTW,i have just repiled to your post in my "A Tribute to passionate poets and a cinquain challenge)pls read and comment ")

may i ask a flavour from you also?you mentioned b4 that you will like to read more of my haiku....can u possibly(if u can spare the time) reply to my post here in Open poetry#7 "S.O.S-a series of haikus for Marina's challenge)
thanx in advance ")

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