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Fog (haiku)
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Fog (haiku) |
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Joannak Member
since 2000-03-11
Posts 121Indiana, USA |
Drifting morning fog creating quiet places for our hearts to hide. jk What better way to become immortal than to wake up each day and write? Ray Bradbury |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
This is deep, J. Good job!! Nathan |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Joannak, This is lovely and very true, thank you for the beauty here. Cerenity |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
Beautiful! Enjoyed this much... haiku isn't easy and you've done a superb job with this. |
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INclan Senior Member
since 1999-07-20
Posts 1024Indiana, USA |
Joanna, This is wonderful...so soft and yet so powerful. I truely admire your work. INclan |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Joanna~ This is truly lovely. You do these with ease. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Joannak Member
since 2000-03-11
Posts 121Indiana, USA |
Thanks Nathan, Cerenity, Doreen, INclan and Marge for your thoughtful comments. Lately I find myself very inspired, and haiku seem to flow from me like a raging river. I hope I do the medium justice, as I have not written many haiku before. Thank you all again. Joanna What better way to become immortal than to wake up each day and write? Ray Bradbury |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
interesting perspective....usually,we lament being unable to see clearly when the fog descends... shall i try something cheeky?  ")  Haze hides our tracks~ Your strong hands move all over~ We hanky panky! |
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mariee66 Senior Member
since 2000-01-30
Posts 596Recess, OfYourMind |
I loved this one, Joanna~ But look at Kaile's reply...a spanking is in order!  Marie~ |
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