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wayoutwalt
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0 posted 2000-04-18 12:10 PM


Readily reworking revolting rewrite
Outlined on obscurity or obsession
Giving garbled gratitude grasping graphite
Easier every executed expression

Trembling trying to treat trepidation
(Apostrophe Apostrophe Apostrophe)
Smiling, seeking synonym’s salvation
Taking time to tighten tangilibity  

Having hardly had harrowing hardship
Every enigmatic ersatz elation
Sometimes sorrow sniffling some sadly skip
All about acrostic alliteration

Understanding unusual understating
Rhyming really removes restful REM
Underneath uttering upbeat undulating
Sometimes sorely stretching screwball synonym


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 All Day I Dream About Stanzas!!




[This message has been edited by wayoutwalt (edited 04-18-2000).]

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Jamie Dawg
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1 posted 2000-04-18 12:50 PM


Totally, Totally,Terrifingly Terrific!
And...since it took me a whole 5 minutes to come up with that line my respect really goes out to you! How long did it take?

Lost Dreamer
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Somewhere near the Rainbow
2 posted 2000-04-18 01:14 PM


Bewildering, Balancing, Base
Rational, Random, Rapture,
Idea, Illuminated, Idiosyncrasies
Level, Lessons, Learned
Leaping, Looking glass, Laughter
Imperative, Infectious, Impressions
Acknowledged, Aesthetic, Agent
Noble, Nonsense, Negotiating
Trustworthy, True, Thoughts.



[This message has been edited by Lost Dreamer (edited 04-18-2000).]

Effigy
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disbelief
3 posted 2000-04-18 01:18 PM


I'm intriged in its inhibition,
it's infectious insanity.

 understanding is misunderstood


Mike
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4 posted 2000-04-18 01:22 PM


*Applause*
you never cease to amaze..

Corazon
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5 posted 2000-04-18 02:43 PM


my only attempt at an acrostic ended up in the waste basket of my mind...and it wasn't even an alliteration.....fantastic!
Mistikman
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6 posted 2000-04-18 06:26 PM


ROFL this is priceless walt  
I love the (Apostrophe Apostrophe Apostrophe)  
This was awsome walt, truly

wayoutwalt
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TEXAS (it's all big)
7 posted 2000-04-18 09:15 PM


no no no no no
yes yes yes yes

WhtDove
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8 posted 2000-04-18 11:16 PM


Walt I love how you did this one...all beginning with the same letters! That would have drove me nuts.  

Great job, fantastico!!

 <*\\\><

When you can't make up your mind,
Which way is right for you,
Stop and softly ask yourself,
"What Would Jesus Do?"

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9 posted 2000-04-18 11:24 PM


W.O.W.~
That is soooooooooo cool, Walt.
You're just brilliant.
YUH !
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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HM3
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since 1999-07-15
Posts 169
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10 posted 2000-04-18 11:25 PM


Um, uh, I know alliteration, but what is the "Acrostic"?  Help me or I'll be up all nite!

Ooops, never mind, it is in the dictionary. OK, gotta go read them again!

;> (feeling blonde I guess)

 Work like money doesn't matter, love like you've never been hurt, dance like nobody's watching...



bobbycat
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11 posted 2000-04-18 11:30 PM


Ah--a poem written from my "bible"....Roget's!!!!   LOL     Great job here....your mind is amazing (as well as anyone else's who can come up with these acrostics!).

Bobbycat =^..^=


 ~~ And it harm none, do what ye will.~~



HM3
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12 posted 2000-04-18 11:31 PM


OK, even better now that I know what to look for. BTW what is another word for Thesauras?




 Work like money doesn't matter, love like you've never been hurt, dance like nobody's watching...



Michael
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13 posted 2000-04-18 11:35 PM


ROFL - touche' Walt... You've done me proud.  


Michael

Nan
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14 posted 2000-04-20 10:07 AM


yippee yippee yippee.....
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