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John Yaws
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0 posted 2000-04-18 11:06 AM


Sixteen April, ‘forty-six….
The day in Scottish memory lives.
An’ many Scotsman crossed the Styx-
We’ll not forget, much less forgive.

Bonnie Charlie, at the fore-
As we marched to meet the foe…
English Lord, and German troops…
How much lower could they go?

Sleet? Aye, that! An’ freezin’ winds
Blowin’ right into our faces…
But fight we must, and fight we did…
Retreat, the Scottish name disgraces.

Tired? Aye , laddie, that we were.
So tired tha’ we could ‘ardly stand.
But wi’ our blades, an’ guns, an’ guts-
We met the Duke o’ Cumberland.

Like tha’ ill-fated Light Brigade…
We ‘ad to face the flamin’ guns .
In the center, right, and left…
A Scotsman dies but never runs.

In the van, our Bonnie Prince-
Charlie, in ‘is tartan coat,
Bonnet wi’ a white cockade…
We seen ‘im through the flame an’ smoke.

Outnumbered nearly two to one-
Exhausted; yet to fight we came…
An’ wrote our names in letters large…
For all ‘ave ‘eard Culloden’s fame.

The saddest part o’ all I guess-
An’ wha’ I never understood…
Is ‘ow it sadly came to pass-
Tha’ Scots were shedding Scottish blood.

Culloden? Aye, I knew it well-
Where more than courage stood the test-
But in an hour we ‘ad lost-
Our ‘opes, our dreams, an’ Scotland’s best.

So much for blades, so much for guns-
So much for armor, an’ for mail-
In minds, the battle’s won, or lost-
Or, so declares “the Traveler’s Tale”.



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Sunshine
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1 posted 2000-04-18 11:40 AM


Well done, enjoyed it much...
WhtDove
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2 posted 2000-04-18 10:48 PM


That last verse says it all!
Back to the forefront  

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When you can't make up your mind,
Which way is right for you,
Stop and softly ask yourself,
"What Would Jesus Do?"

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3 posted 2000-04-18 10:57 PM


Battles are definitely won and lost in the mind. Well done, 'slinger
John Yaws
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4 posted 2000-04-19 12:07 PM


Thanks folks.
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