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Jamie Dawg
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since 2000-03-25
Posts 35


0 posted 2000-04-18 07:46 AM


Its hard to express,
All those feelings inside,
when your poems a mess,
And you just need to hide.

'Look to the family,'
so i've been told.
they'll express their feelings
won't leave you cold.

So here I am...my heart's in your hand.
Feeling a bit fragile...hope you all understand!


[This message has been edited by Jamie Dawg (edited 04-18-2000).]

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Jamie Dawg
Junior Member
since 2000-03-25
Posts 35

1 posted 2000-04-18 01:08 PM


P.s: I have to say that not having the net at home is a major disadvantage! Not enough time to comment on all those lovely literary gems I get to see! Thankyou to Em for letting me use her computer when i need some inspiration. Respect.
wayoutwalt
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since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870
TEXAS (it's all big)
2 posted 2000-04-18 01:10 PM


hehhe this is great yuh great flow and meaning yuh i'd say please more yuh and welcome and dont fret its slow this time of the day at least today you wait we all will come out of the wood works
Parker
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since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129
ON
3 posted 2000-04-18 01:25 PM


Jamie, nice start, just jump in. Were not like one of those florida T-shirts with the sharks on them that says "send more victims"
unless you dare to go into Critical Analysis.
So welcome to the family, and believe me it is a family.

Parker

devina
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since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539
Cali
4 posted 2000-04-18 01:38 PM


Welcome to the family Jamie, glad to know you're sharing in the smiles and cries from now on!!! Just let it flow from your heart!!!

 Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...


Nan
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since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA
5 posted 2000-04-18 01:51 PM


Geesh, Jamie Dogg... You've been here for just a few hours now and you've got almost 20 posts already... WELL... Welcome aboard

We're glad to have you, and I like your silly poem... Silly is the best way to go around here... Oh... yeah.. We have a plethora of talented poets around here who'll just love having you around... Check your email for a special greeting...

Nan
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since 1999-05-20
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Cape Cod Massachusetts USA
6 posted 2000-04-18 01:55 PM


OOPS..... DAWG.....

RainbowGirl
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since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023
United Kingdom
7 posted 2000-04-18 02:15 PM


ROFL @ Nan...ooops...hmmmm

Jamie: Here's a hand, feel free to hold whenever you wish...well, metaphorically speaking...LOL

HUGS

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