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Masquerade(Durn it! If Michael can do it so can I):)
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Masquerade(Durn it! If Michael can do it so can I):) |
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Mistikman Senior Member
since 2000-01-10
Posts 682San Jose, CA, USA |
Masquerade Million marching meddlesome masks Angry, advancing and arranging attacks Stern, stealthy, stepping silently Quarrelsome quartet questioning quietly Unwitting unknowns united unaware Efficiently expanding everywhere Rushing relentlessly, releasing rage Assaults avoided, assiduous age Defense determined, disguises dissipate Evils eradicated, effigies evaporate I decided to try my hand at an acrostic alliteration, just to see how hard it is, and just for kicks, I used the same word Michael did  I hope its somewhat coherent |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Very good Mistikman....is this a trend? Where's my dictionary!!!!!  |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Well I don't think I saw Michael's, but I applaud you! This is very well done. I'm not so good with those. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Mistik~ I like your determination ! Yes you can ! And yes you did ! Very well-crafted. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Jamie Dawg Junior Member
since 2000-03-25
Posts 35 |
If I could convey a whistle on the computer I would! As it is All i can say is its a superb example of crafted material. |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
this is great you nailed it and did well with the Q's nice flow and it made great sense...job well done! All Day I Dream About Stanzas!! |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Well done my friend. The most intriguing thin to me in reading this was your last line. I had originally penned the line: "Evil eradicated evermore" I couldn't make it fit though. Guess my muse truly flew off in your direction. Good job. Michael |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
Good job on the acrostic alliteration, Mistik. "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde |
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Mistikman Senior Member
since 2000-01-10
Posts 682San Jose, CA, USA |
Poet deVine- Heh, please do, I wanna see what an acrostic alliteration deVine style looks like WhtDove- heh, thanks, they are really hard, but if I can do one, then you could do one better Marge Tindal- Why thank you Jamie Dawg- Thanks wayoutwalt- heh, wayoutthanks wayoutwalt Michael- LOL, I borrowed your muse for a night, I hope you didnt mind Thankies  Lovebug- Thanks [This message has been edited by Mistikman (edited 04-18-2000).] |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
Nailed this you did! How come it is, that everytime I issue a challenge, everyone else finishes it before I can even start??? |
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