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Love Lost

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Kissner
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0 posted 04-17-2000 09:53 PM       View Profile for Kissner   Email Kissner   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kissner

Losing Love

I want to runaway,
I want to sit and cry,
I want to figure out just why,
This love so great has turned to a lie.

Let me go,
Let me know,
Why you've trapped me to control me so.

I give you my all,
Only to stand alone for the fall.
No comfort, no arms to hold,
Only anger and hate still yet to explode.

I wish I may,
and only dream that I might,
Take my life and end my loneliness tonight.

L. Kissner
Oct 12, 1999

© Copyright 2000 Kissner - All Rights Reserved
netswan
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since 03-28-2000
Posts 1395
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1 posted 04-18-2000 02:35 AM       View Profile for netswan   Email netswan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit netswan's Home Page   View IP for netswan

Raw, there Kissner. Glad I see you
wrote that in October, so I can feel
fairly safe that most that pain is over.

Lovely poem.

Thanks
netswan
Lone Wolf
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since 03-16-2000
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Lansing, MI USA


2 posted 04-18-2000 02:40 AM       View Profile for Lone Wolf   Email Lone Wolf   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lone Wolf

Kissner,
Hope that you are over this now.  Nice writing!!!  Looking forward to more.  

 Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end.
--Michael W. Smith
lucky
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3 posted 04-18-2000 02:35 PM       View Profile for lucky   Email lucky   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for lucky

I hope that's only a dream.
ESP
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Floating gently on a cloud....


4 posted 05-31-2000 03:46 AM       View Profile for ESP   Email ESP   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ESP

The pain in this one is so beautifully expressed.
I hope things are good now.

Love and hugs,
Lizzie


 "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight."
tracie66
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since 01-18-2000
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5 posted 06-01-2000 04:46 AM       View Profile for tracie66   Email tracie66   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit tracie66's Home Page   View IP for tracie66

Kiss~
Very painful and heart breaking. This brought back memories for me and I know what you are feeling, to feel like you are giving everything your every being and not recieving anything in return except heart ache and pain.
Ditch this one and try to start again and no one is worth ending your life for, no one.
Try to love once more and be happy  
Hugs Tracie~


 Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe


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