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Life (haiku)

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Joannak
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River of the past
flows forward through the present,
creates the future.

jk


 What better way to become immortal than to wake up each day and write?   Ray Bradbury
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Excellent Haiku  
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2 posted 04-17-2000 09:18 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Joanna~
Absolutely lovely.
Perfectly done.
~*Marge*~


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Very nice!

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Joanna,

Great Haiku!

INclan
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Of all the things... I think I figured this one out..! I surprized meself.
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An excellent haiku on life!  I look forward to more haikus by you.

Take care,
Melissa Honeybee  
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Mountain standing proud~
In past,present and future~
True master of time!

dear Joannak,in my humble opinion,i think that's the best haiku i have read from you....your talent fills me with delight!
      

[This message has been edited by kaile (edited 04-20-2000).]
Joannak
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Thanks to all for reading.  For Ruth, Marge, Denise, INclan, Melissa and kaile, I so enjoy reading all of your work.  Kaile, I thank you greatly, I think this haiku is a start of a longer work for me, linking the past, present and the future.  Hopefully I will complete it and be able to submit someday for your comments.  Thanks again to all,

Joanna


 What better way to become immortal than to wake up each day and write? Ray Bradbury


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why thank me,Joannak...we budding haikuists must unite!!! ")

one or teo ideas for your poem

maybe you can write about universal values that will always be close to our hearts no matter the era....values such as love,friendship,filial piety......

stuff that will never grow out of fashion....eg poetry,the art of reading,childhood playthings(though you can write about how though we still long for fun and entertainment,the stuff that captivates our attention are vastly different now)

i will write more once i have the ideas ")

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Hi Joannak,

This is PERFECTION my dear,

Cerenity
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(big hugggsssssss) Awwwwww, this is soooooo pretty, sweet friend, may life always greet you with pleasant suprises and may your life run smoothly and clearly! (sigh) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Joanna, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

 
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