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Good-bye |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
The night we had to say good-bye I sat across from you wondering why I never thought it'd come to this In the beginning we shared such bliss There was no clue to catch a glimpse That today there'd be a total eclipse And blackness would abound From the sky to the ground I hope I find a way out of this mess My love for you I must confess Runs as deep as the ocean As our bodies become one in a continuous motion Two hearts beating in time This could be our prime Maybe it's too late To challenge the hand of fate Perhaps this decision Needs a little revision Before things get out of hand Give our love a chance to stand You could be in for a treat We can create intense heat Two bodies ignite a spark It is no longer dark Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
LoneWolf~ Now this is a profound thought ... 'Perhaps this decision Needs a little revision' I liked. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Marge, Thank you very much. Guess I was having some second thoughts there. Glad you liked it.  Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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netswan Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369Washington |
Oh my, oh my, Lone Wolf -- why oh why would one leave a love like that? Well written poem ---enjoyed reading it. netswan |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
netswan, Thank you for the comment. Glad you liked it. ICQ sometime?? < !signature--> Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith [This message has been edited by Lone Wolf (edited 04-18-2000).] |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
LW, this seems to be written with much emotion. Hope it is not a serious situation in your life. Good writing as always. A life isn't significant except for its impact on other lives. |
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