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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom 
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When you're feeling sad knowing people care that they love you may not make you smile but may help keep you upright stop you from falling to give you courage in dealing with a day of despair just knowing there are hands reaching out to hold yours may not pay the rent but the warmth may help you feel less alone the love and friendship will work as a shield to protect you from unkindness as it settles upon your shoulders like an invisible cloak snuggle into this warmth wrap it round you and when your day gets rough feel the smoothness ease the ache in your muscles and know that you are loved... HUSG |
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LindaMac Junior Member
since 2000-04-16
Posts 23Houston, Texas, USA |
Love makes the world go 'round; and when sadness prevails, we need to stop and count our blessings! This is an inspiring sentiment, ...beautiful. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
A lovely message and poem, and you do have lots of friends who care, I'm one. |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
Awesome! What an inventive way to look at friendship! OF COURSE it would come from you!  |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
This is lovely... and I'm grateful for the cloak of love that may be invisible to the world at large... but is a thing of beauty to the one wrapped in its comfort. *S* |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Sweet RainbowGirl~ Wrap the cloak of friends close around you and know that you are loved. Love you. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Amen.....sometimes in the cold, cruel world, we need a friendly cloak... nice poem RG..! |
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Corazon Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 1209 |
hey can I ditto suthern? can I can I? I haven't used my ditto much lately and its just aching to get out.... *g* great poem....you describe your caring as well with this one....I have felt your cloak too my friend |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
Almost as beautiful as you, my friend ....... HUSG |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
Linda: Bless ..thank you.. HUGS Martie: Thanks sweetheart, someone special is going through a rough time and I wanted to let them know I was thinking of them...never hurts, does it.. HUSG Chris: Inventive??...hmmmm, I thought we all did this...*g* HUSG Suthern: You snuggle down and enjoy my friend.. but don't get it wet cause invisible stuff is murder to dry..LOLHUSG Marge: I'm going to be doing that tonight and that's a fact... Bless youHUSG PdV: We sure do, maybe I could start a new fashion trend here, huh... HUSG Corazon: Course you can but then you did anyway...LOL...Thank you.. HUSG Pepper: Beautiful as the invisible...hmmm..sorry, my humour is being wicked this evening...we do have to laugh, don't we.. HUSG [This message has been edited by RainbowGirl (edited 04-18-2000).] |
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hsystems Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 319Murray, UT, USA |
RainbowGirl - this is SOOO true! You are so talented - so glad you didn't leave us, as it seemed you were going to...  Troy Beautiful, Thought-Provoking Poetry http://www.h-systems.net/p1.htm |
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