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Function and disfunction
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Function and disfunction |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Function and dysfunction My mind is stagnant, stuck in a groove. It just wont think and it just wont move. There are no topics that come to my head. If not for breathing you'd think I was dead. The sun is shining I think more or less. It is coming in the window I guess. But I pay no measure the sun at this time. My only pleasure, to make a verse rhyme. This force of disgust makes wings for a dream. Collecting the dust that floats a lights beam. Relax and wallow on fantasies trail. There you will follow a dream without fail Gossamer mixtures dissolve the minds mist. Stagnant and stuck goes out with persist. And before you know it, there is a dream. And you are a part, of this vital scheme. Dreams can be vivid, dull or severe, Depending on the eye, smell and the ear. Senses encourage to make a dream function, Dysfunction the real to bring it to unction. This is but one way to start on a dream. Most of them start on the point of a gleam. [This message has been edited by Seymour Tabin (edited 04-17-2000).] |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Sun likes your functioning dysfunction... |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
when i saw disfunction in the title... i thought you had wrote on about me *L* great poem Sy...love the rhyme and the reason. well written, as always...like the dream references. take care, jm Well the sun sets gently on your shoulders And it makes me want to touch you there. And the light in your eyes makes me feel Like there's something much better out there Something kind... And I know someday I might be looking around Trying to find some purpose Well purpose it can't be that hard to find As long as I've got the wind... The wind and your love to carry me. vertical horizon |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine, Thank you so much for the read and comment. *L* Janet, Thank you for the sweet comment. *L* |
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Mistikman Senior Member
since 2000-01-10
Posts 682San Jose, CA, USA |
Excellent work on this one Seymour  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Mistikman, Thank you so much for the read and comment. |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Well done, enjoyed. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Thank you Mike for the read and comment. |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
Like this, I do, Sy ...... Great writing here, as always .. L, "This is where you will win the battle .... in the playhouse of your mind." Maxwell Maltz |
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Corazon Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 1209 |
like this....sigh....have been sitting in your sunbeams I guess....have been lacking much inspiration lately too |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
Excellent poem as usual Sy! Nathan |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Sy, For being stagnaut and stuck in a grove your talent is shining brightly my friend. wonderful, wonderful Cerenity |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Pepper, Thank you sweetheart. *L* Corazon, If you sit long enough it will come. Nate, Thank you for the nice comment. Cerenity, Thank you for the wonderful. |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Well, if you have any gleams left over, send one my way, Sy.  |
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