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LoLo468
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0 posted 2000-04-17 02:15 PM



Remember…

Remember…
…The days when life was easy
When we were children
We had no worries
Friends were all we needed
The Boys had cooties
And the Girls were flirts

Remember…
…The days when school was fun
And summer never ended
When laughs and giggles occupied a whole day
When goals were set everyday
And met the next

Remember…
…The days when parents were fun
And everything seemed so bright
When time was sweet
And dreams weren’t just dreams,
They were a way of life

What happened to those days?
Where did they go?
Will we ever get them back?
Are they gone forever,
Or will we relive them through eyes of our children?
Will things ever be the same,
Or will we just have to live with the memories,
And hope for the best?





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vandana
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1 posted 2000-04-17 05:58 PM


Welcome to passion!!!!!!Nice poem!!!!!!
Marina
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2 posted 2000-04-17 06:50 PM


Nicely done.  Welcome to Passions!  I look forward to reading more of your poems.

Marina

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3 posted 2000-04-17 11:34 PM


LoLo~
Welcome to Passion's !
Those 'memories' are all still there..
tucked away in the Rolodex of memories
in your mind.
Enjoyed this a lot.
~*Marge*~


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netswan
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since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369
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4 posted 2000-04-18 02:54 AM


Welcome LoLo  Great Poem.

I envy you your memories.  Not all of
us got to live like that.

Those memories that you cherish
are memories you can pull up to live
again and again or do it like I did
and watch your own children skipping
around playfully, not a care in the world.

netswan


netswan

Cerenity
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5 posted 2000-04-18 09:15 AM


Hi LoLo468,

This was wonderful, I think those things are still around its just when we grow up the challenges of life make the past abscured.
Welcome to passions

Cerenity

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