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pen of passion
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since 1999-08-11
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0 posted 2000-04-17 12:17 PM


Blue Skies

I see the sun stop by to kiss your cheek,
in awe, I cannot speak.

Watching the blue skies in your eyes,
wondering about the heaven hiding inside,

Somewhere, for someday, I may be searching
for a passion, that's hard to find.

But for now, I am love-struck-
by the beauty in your eyes.

© Copyright 2000 pen of passion - All Rights Reserved
vandana
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Member Patricius
since 1999-10-22
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1 posted 2000-04-17 06:08 PM


Nice poem!!!!!!!!!
hoot_owl_rn
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since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA
2 posted 2000-04-18 10:02 AM


Sounds like love to me  
Nate Dogg
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since 1999-11-15
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Georgia, Fulton
3 posted 2000-04-18 01:59 PM


Very beautiful

 Nathan

hsystems
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since 2000-03-28
Posts 319
Murray, UT, USA
4 posted 2000-04-18 02:38 PM


Nice job, p.o.p. - looks like you love nature  almost as much as you love the one this poem was written for!


Troy

 Beautiful, Thought-Provoking Poetry
http://www.h-systems.net/p1.htm


ESP
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since 2000-01-25
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Floating gently on a cloud....
5 posted 2000-05-31 03:42 AM


That is love to be sure....lovely poem!

Love and hugs,
Lizzie


 "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight."

spiked
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since 2000-01-13
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Hammond, La USA
6 posted 2000-05-31 03:47 AM


Short and Sweet
Very nice poem
Rich

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