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Toerag
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0 posted 2000-04-17 11:49 AM


Stepping outside of her apartment,
In the early morning stillness
She's wearing nothing but undergarments,
I suddenly noticed how beautiful
The lines of a parking lot were.

"hand me that beer and joint please"


[This message has been edited by Toerag (edited 04-17-2000).]

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suthern
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1 posted 2000-04-17 11:55 AM


And just WHOSE apartment are you stepping out of dressed only in your undies? *G* Better share some of those numbing agents, sweets! LOL.

Oh... jealousy sidetracked me... *G* Great poem/observation! *G*

RainbowGirl
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2 posted 2000-04-17 11:58 AM


ROFL....Darling, you're going to have to stop this cause my stockings simply don't suit you and they're to short for you...ROFL

HUSG

Suthern:..I'm kidding, honest!!!...*g*

HUSG

Sunshine
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3 posted 2000-04-17 12:05 PM


Beast!  LOL!
RSEvans
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4 posted 2000-04-17 12:06 PM


As long as your not in Deer's panties...I don't think I could handle that mental picture...funny
suthern
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5 posted 2000-04-17 12:43 PM


Aw, shucks... ya went and edited it. *G* And I'm STILL jealous of that she! *S*
Pepper
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6 posted 2000-04-18 08:22 AM


      
Corazon
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7 posted 2000-04-18 09:21 AM


well lolol I am gonna laugh anyway, even if its edited  
WhtDove
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8 posted 2000-04-18 10:23 AM


ROFL!! Sure Toe, just typical you'd notice the lines in the parking lot.

Now that I know you edited something out, ya got me hanging...grr..haha

Thanks for the laugh to start my day  

Rex Allen McCoy
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9 posted 2000-04-18 10:32 AM


Pssst ... heh ... is it safe to come out from under the bed yet ?

Rex}>{{{{o>

Nan
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10 posted 2000-04-20 09:17 AM


Well, considering that I wasn't quick enough to catch the first run of this masterpiece, I have to sit here and giggle at Rex...   
SEA
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11 posted 2000-04-21 03:07 AM


Toe~ hey! No fair editing.... I have been away for a few days and now I've missed what I'll just have to guess was a great one! (she says with a pouty lip-stomping one foot)-SEA
Rosemary J. Gwaltney
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12 posted 2000-04-21 03:38 AM


Toe - how dare you tease me like that! Sheesh, that poem must have been more than any beer or herb could produce!  Here I sit,   wondering what on earth you edited out!  You little stinker!



 The spiritual wind that keeps survivors aloft, plants the seeds from which bloom new hope for the world ... R.J.G.

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