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Trapped inside your Beauty
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First__Knight Senior Member
since 1999-11-08
Posts 678
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Trapped inside your Beauty ~First Knight~ No moment of silence I know, Your presence fulfilled its duty. My thoughts no longer my own, I am trapped inside your beauty. Calling of my heart to you, This sound I have heard before. Fifteen years have long since passed, I thought I'd closed this door. Needing you before all else, As you lived there in my dreams. Such a wonder of pure delight I lived for you it seems. Loving you it came with ease, Not a thing I could not do. Except accept the fact of truth, I could not be with you. I left the town where we once lived, A move that saw us part I lost you in the years that came, But not within my heart. Now time has passed and here you are, Past prayers now come to life. I can't believe its really you, And your no one's wife. You mean much more than you did before, I want tell you the truth I loved you then and I love you again, My true love of my youth. No moment of silence I know, Your presence fulfilled its duty. My thoughts no longer my own, I am trapped inside your beauty. A man does not love a woman because she is beautiful...But she is beautiful because he loves her. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
David~ What a beautiful moment. This slice of your life is told with tenderness. Trusting that you are doing well, I care. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
David...this is a beautiful heartfelt poem. Thinking of you  |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
"I lost you in the years that came, But not within my heart." ~ an especially lovely line, this. I enjoyed this piece...it reflects sincere emotion, so well shared throughout these verses. ~ Claire |
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tulip Member
since 1999-07-04
Posts 320unknown |
First_Knight, This was very beautiful! I wish you the best and hope you find everything you could hope for! |
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First__Knight Senior Member
since 1999-11-08
Posts 678 |
My thanks to you all....This came from a memory of a young girl who I knew in high school when I was only 16 and wanted her for all time. A man does not love a woman because she is beautiful...But she is beautiful because he loves her. |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Memories are wonderful First Knight - your writing stirred memories of my first love - I hope you are able to reignite such love with her again......Roniece |
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho |
Sounds like a good place to meditate for awhile. |
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Lone Ranger Member
since 2000-04-16
Posts 92Salvador , Bahia , Brazil |
Truly Amazing! I should say this is one of the poems that I relate the most! It felt like you were living my life... "Only in the dreams , is that man can truly be free It was always thus and always thus will be" Prof. Keating Dead Poets Society |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
I am trapped inside your words of this poem! awesome!!!  as usual! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
A lovely title and beautiful words. You are really writing some creative poems lately. I love reading them. James |
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First__Knight Senior Member
since 1999-11-08
Posts 678 |
I am glad you could remember with me Roniece, Hehe Lucky Maybe we can all relate in some way..thanks Lone Ranger. Awwee thanks Romantic Heart Thank you James |
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