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Nicole
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since 1999-06-23
Posts 1835
Florida

0 posted 2000-04-17 04:06 AM


Hold me dear, show me love
Endure with me the trials
Laugh with me, cry with me
Pace with me the miles

Mingle in life, in friendship true
Ever bound to bridge the gap
Lost in days’ to do’s and now’s
Or in each other’s arms enwrapped

Value my mind as I do yours
Enjoy our ‘moments’ and ‘times’
Ageless years, a joint life in love
Growing closer as we climb

Atop a peak that we’ll call ‘Us’
In love with loving each other true
Never betraying our hearts’ trust



 May I never be too busy to help another's load,
Then I'll be drinking from the saucer 'cause my cup has overflowed.

--Author Unknown

© Copyright 2000 Nicole Williams - All Rights Reserved
Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
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Posts 8296
Purgatorial Incarceration
1 posted 2000-04-17 04:19 AM


Sigh...

*swoon, thud*  

You've a penchant for passion m'friend. Your pen bleeds romance without the "ick." And to bone it all up in an acrostic... Smile!!

An LOVE the last line... gets me right here!


  

[This message has been edited by Christopher (edited 04-17-2000).]

Michael
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Posts 7666
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2 posted 2000-04-17 05:50 AM


Earth to Mike, come In Mike... Ahem...  
O.k., I'm back now, Wow.

The emotion is dripping off my screen as I read this one.  The yearning to love again and love "true" is something we definately share, as well as the trepidition of opening up and trusting again.  

I'm with Chris here:  Swoooooon!!!


Michael  

Danny Holloway
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since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034
Tulsa, OK
3 posted 2000-04-17 10:59 AM


Very nice job with this Acrostic (and it rhymes).
Excellent work Satiate!

 A life isn't significant except for its impact on other lives.


hoot_owl_rn
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since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA
4 posted 2000-04-18 10:01 AM


Great acrostic  
Marge Tindal
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5 posted 2000-04-18 09:20 PM


Satiate~
This is a lovely acrostic.
Really a nice job.
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com



Cassanova
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since 2000-04-12
Posts 39
Turlock, Ca.
6 posted 2000-04-18 09:21 PM


WOW!

This is AMAZING!!!

Ok Satiate, where do I stand in line???  

Balladeer
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7 posted 2000-04-18 09:24 PM


Beautiful, satiate..........
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