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I Don't Love Something That Can Kill Unexpectedly (challenge from Doreen Peri) |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow 
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I Don't Love Something That Can Kill Unexpectedly Where does safety reign from this rancid storm my heart is palpitating out of control for reason friend announces I love storms send it my way I can only respond honestly and wholeheartedly I don't love something that can kill unexpectedly. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
LostDreamer~ Must be the full moon.  You're a doll ! Love that sense of timing. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
You know - I wish I'd read this when I was like 16 or so. Might have saved me some serious heartache in life. Probably not though - I seem to only be able to love just that - "things that can kill unexpectedly". Challenge well met - and darn good "phraze" too. Michael |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
Marge: LOL, whatever reason I am deathly afraid of lightening, it has to much strength for my liking. Michael: This was about a string of storms that came through overnight one after another while I talked with Doreen on the internet, she said, "I love storms send them my way" and my response was, "I dont love something that could kill me." She absolutely love the phrase also and told me I need to write a poem about that so I did. Thanks for reading and enjoying. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Oh, you met that challange well....but I too happen to love storms, one of the few times I can actually rest peacefully |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Challenge well met, Gloria! I am very afraid of lightning too. Denise |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
I think storms are one of Gods greatest creations. So electrifyingly beautiful. Jeffrey |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
Hey, Gloria...you did it! Nice job!! Mind if I use the same phrase and try to write something to meet my own challenge? Let me know.... we writers are notorious crooks, huh? If a line ain't nailed down, we just might steal it... but I'd rather ask first... hehe  |
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