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What Fluff's Their Feather's

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Lost Dreamer
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0 posted 04-16-2000 06:54 PM       View Profile for Lost Dreamer   Email Lost Dreamer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Lost Dreamer

What Fluff's Their Feather's

What fluffs their feather's out of place
making them think they have a case?
All holy, thou, and mighty all in one
run away ego child go have some fun.
Glorifying another ground I'm not familiar
mine is plenty fine and usually not far.
Take the mind games to your maker
I refuse to bow down and be your faker.
Last I knew I was human flesh with a heart
and surprising enough I might even be smart.
Can you walk all over me like I'm buried dirt
grinding your feet harder and harder to hurt?
I exist front and center not below your feet
open up those eyes before you're in defeat.
I can cast finality before this day is done
as you choose to blow away the setting sun.


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Marge Tindal
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1 posted 04-16-2000 07:20 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

LostDreamer~
Feel better?
Whew ... this one should clear the air.
Hon, e-mail me if I can help you feel
better.  I'm pretty good at that
pick-me-up stuff !  
Love ya'
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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doreen peri
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2 posted 04-16-2000 07:50 PM       View Profile for doreen peri   Email doreen peri   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for doreen peri

Damn, Gloria? What fluffed your feathers???? Geesh... you certainly told THEM!

Nicely said... remind me to ask you to help me verbalize when i get angry with someone... LOL

Enjoyed!
Poet deVine
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3 posted 04-16-2000 09:39 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

*tiptoe out of here PdV*

Great poem!!! Very good imagery here!!! You tell 'em!  
Mistikman
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4 posted 04-16-2000 09:49 PM       View Profile for Mistikman   Email Mistikman   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mistikman

hehe, well done Lost Dreamer   I dont think I wanna be the person to whom this is directed to  
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5 posted 04-16-2000 09:54 PM       View Profile for Alicat   Email Alicat   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alicat

ONE....TWO.....THREE...HE'S OUTTA THERE....


Nice slam....whoa.....


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6 posted 04-17-2000 12:38 AM       View Profile for Lost Dreamer   Email Lost Dreamer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lost Dreamer

Marge: yes I think I am feeling better since now I read this and start laughing at myself. Thanks for your kindness.

Doreen: Glad you enjoyed it, what type of people usually ruffle feather's?...LOL

Sharon:Thank You, no need to tiptoe I'm giggly now  

Mistikman:LOL I wouldn't want to be him either lucky it was in writing and he never heard a word of it. Thanks for reading  

Ali:LOL, amazing what the written word can do, thanks for reading glad you enjoyed.  
A Romantic Heart
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7 posted 04-17-2000 12:56 AM       View Profile for A Romantic Heart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for A Romantic Heart

Shew...feathers flying all over the place! Their not ruffeled anymore...I think they are now indian feathers....ready for a war dance!hehe

 

Lost Dreamer
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8 posted 04-17-2000 08:47 AM       View Profile for Lost Dreamer   Email Lost Dreamer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lost Dreamer

Romantic Heart: LOL, I love it indian feathers ready to do a war dance. Thanks for reading a making me laugh  
hoot_owl_rn
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9 posted 04-18-2000 09:55 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

*quietly closes the door before Lost Dreamer gets a chance to see here, once outside and safe again, sighs deeply* geesh...glad I'm not on the recieving end of that one  
Corazon
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10 posted 04-18-2000 09:58 AM       View Profile for Corazon   Email Corazon   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Corazon

great writing....the emotions come through like gang busters .....hope today sees you with a smile  
Denise
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11 posted 05-13-2000 03:11 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Whew! That's some steam you blew off here, Gloria! I'd like to shove this in my sister-in-law's face....ooops......did I say that? That's okay, I don't think she knows how to read.....LOL.....I know, I know, I'm being bad, but sometimes it just feels sooooo good, ya know?  

Denise

I've must have missed this one when my server went out for two days....boy I have alot of catching up to do around here!

[This message has been edited by dsnyder (edited 05-13-2000).]
Lost Dreamer
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12 posted 05-17-2000 11:41 AM       View Profile for Lost Dreamer   Email Lost Dreamer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lost Dreamer

Ruth: LOL, nobody ended up on the receiving end of this one, I got it out of my system through the poem. Thanks for reading and replying I appreciate.  

Corazon: Thank you, I appreciate your reading, replying, and compliment.  

Denise: I have a Sister-in-law like that too, but I would not waste my breath on her...LOL Thank you for reading and replying, I appreciate.  
 
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