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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2000-04-16 06:40 PM



Writer's Moon
~*Marge Tindal*~


Writer's Moon
There she glows again
sharing her light from above
Filling the night with rays of love
softly waltzing through night's sky
Casting the spell of magnetic urging
causing waves of desire wildly surging
She has again placed stars in her hair
their beauty twinkling with her there
Walking right through glorious night
blinding lovers both young and old
with stories of striking delight
I think I've just seen the
writer's moon glow
magically






 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Lost Dreamer
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1 posted 2000-04-16 07:08 PM


Marge, I'm glad it brightens your path, this time is seems to be putting a haze over mine. Beautiful poem as always your so perky and upbeat all the time.  
Honeybee
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2 posted 2000-04-16 07:14 PM


Marge, you have done it again, both an excellent poem and a great presentation.  How do you do it?  You are just a unique, inspiring poet.  I like the thought of your "writer's moon."

Take care,
Melissa Honeybee  

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3 posted 2000-04-16 07:30 PM


Marge - I'm not sure how you do it, but please never stop! Always a wonder, to catch your latest outpouring of creativity!
doreen peri
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4 posted 2000-04-16 07:44 PM


There's magic in your words, Marge... wonderful!!
devina
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5 posted 2000-04-16 08:13 PM


I always *love* your moon displays dear...so she has hit again eh? G* Lovely thoughts Miss Marge!!!

*Love you*
~D


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6 posted 2000-04-16 08:30 PM


Did anyone ever tell you there is a certain glow about your poetry?  beautifully written...
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7 posted 2000-04-16 09:17 PM


LostDreamer~
It is brightly lit, sweetie.  
Am sending some your way.  Look up !

Melissa~
I thank you so much for your inspiring thoughts.  She's out there again tonight.
All dressed up and dancing across the sky.

Christopher~
Luv, I thank you.  The moon does the
walking and I try to do the talking.
She is splendid is she not?

Doreen~
Thank you, my dear.  She is aglow !

Devina~
Well, if I never had another muse ...
I can count on Ms. Moon to hit me full
at least once every month.
Love you too !  

Mike~
What an especially nice thing for you
to say.  Thank you so much.
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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8 posted 2000-04-16 09:25 PM


Hmmm...is that a moon I see with myopic eyes?  Verily must my specs be found, so's I might gaze lovingly upon that moon..and that moon's moon while I ready my pea-shooter....


*grins evilly*


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9 posted 2000-04-16 09:38 PM


hmmm...I got mooned today too,  (but mine didn't lead into a poem at all)  LOL.

Very fine poem Marge.  I truly enjoyed it.

chris




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Marge Tindal
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10 posted 2000-04-16 09:52 PM


Alicat~
LOL @ your 'pea-shooter'.

ChrisG~
LOL @ your 'mooned' ...
I won't go there on that one !  
Love you guys !
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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11 posted 2000-04-17 01:01 AM


Beautiful moon display...whew! must be a full one tonight, we must all be werewolves!heehee! Someone else wrote a moon poem also! hmmmmm....You know what they say when theres a full moon!

Ps..(Laughing)...still at peas shooter remark! hehehe!


 


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12 posted 2000-04-17 02:37 AM


I like it too...
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13 posted 2000-04-17 02:54 AM


I definitely enjoyed this sweet fantasy and your evocative language. Thanks.

Mike

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14 posted 2000-04-17 05:46 AM


This is beautiful!!! I love it....I wish I could see the writer's moon, it sounds wonderful!!

Love and hugs,
Lizzie



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15 posted 2000-04-17 05:52 AM


Ah the moon and stars combine to cast a beautiful scene, lovely imagery Marge and I love the way you've done this.
A perfect poem
Tracie~


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Anne Rooks


Michael
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16 posted 2000-04-17 06:32 AM


Indeed, you have seen and shown it to us all as well.  This one glows.  

Michael

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17 posted 2000-04-17 10:47 AM


~Marge~
     I must agree with doreen, dear.  There is magic in your words.  They glow with a light all their own!!!




 ~you reached inside, you touched my heart,
and I am all the better for it~
Terry A. Woodson, Jr.

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18 posted 2000-04-17 09:23 PM


Oh, I saw that moon too--and it was just as lovely as you say...beautiful poem, sis!!
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19 posted 2000-04-17 09:31 PM


Beautiful!

Denise

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RomanticHeart~
Ahhhh ... the full of the moon.
Brings out the 'luna-tic' in a lot of us !

Lucky~
Kisses to my buddy !
I like you too !

ESP~
Just step outside and look up.
She's there with enough beauty to
inspire us all.  Thank you.

Tracie~
Thank you for always having the nicest
things to say.

Michael~
I like it when you notice the 'glow'.

TerryW~
Awwwwww !  So sweet.  Thank you.

Martie~
My sister moon-watcher, I thank you.

Denise~
Yes, and she glows for you also.
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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21 posted 2000-04-18 08:59 AM


Inspiration
your name is
Marge

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22 posted 2000-04-18 09:18 AM


An interesting concept a writer's moon  
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23 posted 2000-04-18 09:24 AM


Oh another magical piece from you Marge, I love that moon too!!  

 What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge



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24 posted 2000-04-18 09:38 AM


nicely done Marge ... we had a blue moon a couple months back ... it was beautiful to see

Rex}>{{{{o>

Nan
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25 posted 2000-04-18 03:48 PM


Hey - Marge mooned us... in style, I might add..

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26 posted 2000-04-18 03:56 PM


Marge, you are so good, its not a rumor...  
You are a living paragoric of colour, and you brighten up this place just so.

I have a challenge for you dear, I would like to see you do another Moon poem, this time the cresent moon, please.  
I know you can do it.

Parker

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27 posted 2000-04-18 07:39 PM


Hi Marge,

The moon must have special powers these days because everyone has been hit with moon fever, and you my dear are so beautifully beaming in this one as always,

Love ya,  Cerenity

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28 posted 2007-12-01 06:55 PM


Lovely Marge, you write lovely.

A

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