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Mer50
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0 posted 2000-04-16 06:38 PM


I'm thinking about you now
Just like I always do
I never thought I'd meet pure beauty
You're my dream come true

The warmth of your smile
The heat in your touch
Every second you're not here
I'm missing you so much

The roses knew my secret,
The violets did too.
Now the whole world knows,
How much I love you.

When you take my hand
and I look at your eyes in the night
I'm staring at the beauty of Heaven
I feel so safe, I know this is right

Add up every drop of rain
And every twig in all the trees
What you'll end up with
Is how much you mean to me

The roses knew my secret,
The violets did too.
Now the whole world knows,
How much I love you.

Every day I've been weak
You've made me feel so much stronger
I'd stop all time
To make one minute with you last a little longer

The roses knew my secret,
The violets did too.
Now the whole world knows,
How much I love you.


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Lost Dreamer
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since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464
Somewhere near the Rainbow
1 posted 2000-04-16 07:18 PM


This is so sweet, the person you wrote it for must have been or will be delighted. Thanks for sharing it here with us.  
doreen peri
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since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812
Virginia
2 posted 2000-04-16 07:53 PM


Lovely... quite lovely!

Welcome to Passions... are you new? I'll look for more of your work.

dp

Nan
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Cape Cod Massachusetts USA
3 posted 2000-04-18 02:00 PM


Mer - This is really very lovely - Do consider registering and joining us, OK??? We'd all like to read more of your work..
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