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Wobbly Head Bob
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since 2000-05-15
Posts 299
Virginia, USA

0 posted 2006-08-11 12:35 PM



***This is already posted on another forum, but I was surprised to see a lot of recognized names in the Corner Pub, so I wanted to share this with you as well***

I know right now there's something deep inside of me
It broods in darkness
only stirring in its
suffering

Sometimes I've felt like this and more than what I give to you
I couldn't break it
even if I really
wanted to

It gives the voice to things that crowd around inside my brain
I couldn't shut them off
or figure out how to
contain

These are things I've had and more will come to me I'm sure
I don't want them back
and won't accept this
anymore

Is no one like me?
A shallow pit of disgust
You don't know me!
Or my psychosomatic lust
I'm only crawling!
On the floor of consciousness
Can you hear me?
As my voice fades off into dust


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nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200
Between the Lines
1 posted 2006-08-11 03:54 PM


It gives the voice to things that crowd around inside my brain
I couldn't shut them off
or figure out how to
contain


very interesting  write...

my brain is like that now...so much  going on inside

M

Joyce Johnson
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since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912
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2 posted 2006-08-12 12:37 PM


I'm really glad you found us.  Lots of anguish in this piece.  Joyce
midnightblues
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since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597
Singapore
3 posted 2006-08-12 11:56 AM


Hi Bob,

Thanks for sharing this, I can relate to the feelings of anguish and helplessness that you expressed in your writing..

Love,
MiCheLLe

If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues

pegasus111
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since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219
ocala, fl, usa
4 posted 2006-08-14 05:21 AM


this is deep. I see it as a cry for help. Not sure I would call it lust.

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost



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