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Pyschosomatic Lust

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Wobbly Head Bob
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0 posted 08-11-2006 12:35 PM       View Profile for Wobbly Head Bob   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Wobbly Head Bob


***This is already posted on another forum, but I was surprised to see a lot of recognized names in the Corner Pub, so I wanted to share this with you as well***

I know right now there's something deep inside of me
It broods in darkness
only stirring in its
suffering

Sometimes I've felt like this and more than what I give to you
I couldn't break it
even if I really
wanted to

It gives the voice to things that crowd around inside my brain
I couldn't shut them off
or figure out how to
contain

These are things I've had and more will come to me I'm sure
I don't want them back
and won't accept this
anymore

Is no one like me?
A shallow pit of disgust
You don't know me!
Or my psychosomatic lust
I'm only crawling!
On the floor of consciousness
Can you hear me?
As my voice fades off into dust

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nakdthoughts
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1 posted 08-11-2006 03:54 PM       View Profile for nakdthoughts   Email nakdthoughts   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for nakdthoughts

It gives the voice to things that crowd around inside my brain
I couldn't shut them off
or figure out how to
contain


very interesting  write...

my brain is like that now...so much  going on inside

M
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2 posted 08-12-2006 12:37 AM       View Profile for Joyce Johnson   Email Joyce Johnson   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Joyce Johnson

I'm really glad you found us.  Lots of anguish in this piece.  Joyce
midnightblues
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3 posted 08-12-2006 11:56 AM       View Profile for midnightblues   Email midnightblues   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit midnightblues's Home Page   View IP for midnightblues

Hi Bob,

Thanks for sharing this, I can relate to the feelings of anguish and helplessness that you expressed in your writing..

Love,
MiCheLLe

If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues

pegasus111
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4 posted 08-14-2006 05:21 AM       View Profile for pegasus111   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit pegasus111's Home Page   View IP for pegasus111

this is deep. I see it as a cry for help. Not sure I would call it lust.

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost


 
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