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Lighthousebob
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Luna's Dawn



Cascading falls of blue adorn
Seep trough the crags of early morn
To touch the stymied sleepy eye
Of Lunaís mask on rising sky
Entangled with the sunís estate
Where stars discuss their certain fate
To vanish in the coming stance
And meditate on duskís romance
Where night owl calls to praise the name
And shadow crawls to do the same
Of goddess on her silver stream
Who casts her spell on dreamerís dreams
Through flowing robes of sequined beams
That tumble down with such extreme
That loverís hearts as one do beat
And shimmer through the moonís retreat
Behind a mountain by the sea
Or in the minds of you and me
As pallid light of Love withdrawn
Until the time of Lunaís dawn.


Lighthouse Bob




© Copyright 2006 Robert E. Michaud Jr. - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 07-28-2006 11:59 PM       View Profile for midnightblues   Email midnightblues   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit midnightblues's Home Page   View IP for midnightblues

Every word that you use is poetry on its own.. I really like this dreamy piece!

Love,
MiCheLLe

If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues

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you have outdone yourself with this romantic piece.  Love, Joyce
Jess
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3 posted 07-29-2006 01:30 AM       View Profile for Jess   Email Jess   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Jess

This is absolutely beautiful. Every word. I havent posted anything for a long time but I read this poem and knew that I had to say something; had to convey how lovely and dreamy and exquisite I think it is
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4 posted 07-30-2006 03:20 PM       View Profile for Trillium   Email Trillium   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Trillium

Dear Bob:  This is a masterpiece of poetry!

Betty Lou

Betty Lou Hebert

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5 posted 07-30-2006 11:46 PM       View Profile for Mysteria   Email Mysteria   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mysteria

Oh my!
pegasus111
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great piece Bob!  bravo!

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost


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7 posted 07-31-2006 02:55 PM       View Profile for divine chaos   Email divine chaos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for divine chaos

this absolutely stunning
wonderful wonderful piece

~*Sheli*~

By words the mind is winged
~Aristophanes~

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This is supurb! Thanks for the pleasure of reading this poem.
Lighthousebob
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Thank you everyone for your kind and encouraging words.




MiCheLLe,

I am happy and really a bit surprised that every word became as poetry to you. Every word? Really? That's a beautiful compliment. Thank you.


Joyce,

Moi???? Romantic??? Smiles. I guess we all have our moments.... Again, thank you for your loving encouragement and your kind words.


Jess,

I was especially glad to see that you read my poem because I know how very very much you love Greek Mythology and thank you for your most exuberent response. I appreciate it very much.


Betty Lou,

Your response was short and most sweet as I do know from whose lips has come--"Masterpiece!" Tahnk you so very very much.


Mysteria,

I'm so glad that you came by
with your vibrant most, "Oh My!"

You gave me Big Smiles.

Thank you.


Pegasus,

It's always a pleasure for me to hear from a man with a kindred spirit. Thank you (thank you) always for your kind words.


Sheli,

Thank you. Your praise really touched me. It truly stirred my heart to hear such wonderful encouraging words. Thank you.


Munda,

Thank you for your kind words.... Really, Really, Really, The Pleausre Was All Mine.


Again, Thank You Everyone!!!

-Bob


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