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jenny Junior Member
since 2006-03-30
Posts 45 |
I saw an ad on tv the other night and it was about a car called a Holden Barina and i literally fell in love with this car. I can never afford it,but it doesn't hurt to dream Silly eh. Anyway the poem is called MY CAR,MY CAR. My car,my car,it is only small,it will take me far. I'll hitch myself to the swiftest star. I will travel down the road on silent mode. With twists and turns and looks that yearn, as ilisten to the engine burn. My car,my car,its my star. it doesn't matter what colour it is, red or white, black or blue. It is something i am looking forward too. When i slip my hand over the wheel, my whole world will be off keel. Thats when i know my fate will be sealed. I have fallen in love with a car. Maybe one day it will come my way, when it does it will make my day. The leather seats with the beautiful new smell, it is something i am going to know so well. It is enough to keep me under its spell. When i look at the steel and chrome, i feel my mind start to roam. When ilook at this car so shiny and new, it gives me a different point of view. As isit behind the wheel, it is amazing what you start to feel, this car is pure sex appeal. When the engine purrs into life,you take away my worry and strife. It doesn't matter where you are, your always going to be my car,my car. Hope you like it Jen |
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Trillium 
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Hi Jen: I remember the frist time I saw a Crossfire! I really wanted one, but I'm still waiting!! Hope you get yours! Betty Lou Betty Lou Hebert |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
One car looks like another to me but it is nice to see such youthful enthusiasm. Love, Joyce |
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midnightblues Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597Singapore |
Oh it is a cute little poem and I had fun reading it! Love, MiCheLLe If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
Jenny, What a fun poem!!! I never heard of a Holden Barina but it sounds Fantastic. I enjoyed reading about your dream car and I really enjoyed seeing you through your words admiring it, driving it, and claiming it as your very very own. Again, thank you for sharing and God bless you my poetess friend. -Bob |
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Dublin Boy Member
since 2006-08-26
Posts 102UK |
A lively sense of fun animates this piece, Jenny--nicely done. A Holden--that's an Australian car, I believe. Cheers, Bill |
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