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Andrew Dickinson New Member
since 2006-07-26
Posts 8 |
Never a crack upon the tombstone, or blemish of the sun, nor the two bled into one, and never are evolvers worn into passage of true troubadours in passing of the mark to which combines of poet contemporary times: I am forgotten in the light of the beyond that beholds apocalyptic dawns befitting silence rising from night. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Andrew~ Welcome to PiP and to the Corner Pub~ May your 'contemporary ghost' visit us often~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Welcome to The Corner. Your first post, but not your first poem, I'm sure. Nice work. Joyce |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
WELCOME TO PASSIONS! A most excellent first post. I hope to read more of your work. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ For it was not into my ear you whispered |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
Andrew, WOW! Your poem was very creative and well written and I really liked how you added a syllable each time up to 10 and then back down to 5. This style was really fascinating to me and I'll have to try to write one of these poems for myself. Smiles. I also enjoyed the kind of melancholy mood that your poem created. Again, very well written and I do hope that you'll be back to share some more of your poetry with us. -Bob |
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midnightblues Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597Singapore |
Wowser! Welcome to passions! Love, MiCheLLe If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues |
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