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Contemporary Ghost

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Andrew Dickinson
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Never a crack
upon the tombstone,
or blemish of the sun,
nor the two bled into one,
and never are evolvers worn
into passage of true troubadours
in passing of the mark to which combines
of poet contemporary times:
I am forgotten in the light
of the beyond that beholds
apocalyptic dawns
befitting silence
rising from night.
© Copyright 2006 Andrew Dickinson - All Rights Reserved
Marge Tindal
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1 posted 07-26-2006 08:47 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Andrew~
Welcome to PiP and to the Corner Pub~

May your 'contemporary ghost' visit us often~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email -       noles1@totcon.com       

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Welcome to The Corner.  Your first post, but not your first poem, I'm sure.  Nice work.  Joyce
Enchantress
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Somewhere in time~


3 posted 07-26-2006 11:36 AM       View Profile for Enchantress   Email Enchantress   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Enchantress

WELCOME TO PASSIONS!
A most excellent first post.
I hope to read more of your work.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

For it was not into my ear you whispered
But into my heart..
It was not my lips you kissed
But my soul.

Lighthousebob
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4 posted 07-28-2006 08:35 PM       View Profile for Lighthousebob   Email Lighthousebob   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Lighthousebob's Home Page   View IP for Lighthousebob

Andrew,

W E L C O M E

WOW! Your poem was very creative and well written and I really liked how you added a syllable each time up to 10 and then back down to 5. This style was really fascinating to me and I'll have to try to write one of these poems for myself. Smiles. I also enjoyed the kind of melancholy mood that your poem created.

Again, very well written and I do hope that you'll be back to share some more of your poetry with us.

-Bob
midnightblues
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Wowser!
Welcome to passions!

Love,
MiCheLLe

If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues

 
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