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Silent Prisoner
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0 posted 2006-07-22 01:19 PM



From the moment I met you
it has all been one game after another,
mostly mind games and waiting games.
But games they still were,
they seemed to go on with out ceasing
till I could never tell reality.

From the moment I met you
you have been trying to leave me behind,
but always came running back.
It was all just to play again,
it was always your games
that kept you returning to me.

From the moment I met you
it all seemed to be onesided,
whenever you needed me I was there.
But when the time came that I was the one in need,
you were no where to be found,
I was just not important enough
at least not for you.

So just stop with all your games
but since you seem to like playing,
I've made a new one just for you.
It's the game where you sit there needing me,
while I walk out the door
and don't return to you.

"I will give you my strength and my will to live strong."

© Copyright 2006 Silent Prisoner - All Rights Reserved
Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2006-07-22 06:59 PM


SilentPrisoner~
Game players are no fun~
They continue to hurt you if you let them~
You've done wise to send this one on the way~

Good poetic emote~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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2 posted 2006-07-22 07:10 PM


Silent Prisoner:  I'm sorry for what you have gone through with this relationship you write about. Hopefully better days are ahead for you.

Betty Lou

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3 posted 2006-07-22 07:10 PM


I hope you stick to your intention of turning this game around.  Well done.  Joyce
Lighthousebob
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4 posted 2006-07-23 09:46 PM


S.P.

Though another sad poem, I liked it and I thought that you displayed in words very well the hurtfulness experienced when people play games with each other's emotions.

God bless.

-Bob

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