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Silent Prisoner
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0 posted 07-17-2006 03:10 PM       View Profile for Silent Prisoner   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Silent Prisoner


So it has finally come
to this once again.
Another friend to abandon me
to the cold dark place of loneliness.
I'm still here in this place
and I'm still waiting for you to release this pain.

It's sorta cold here
and the days pass by slowly.
I can feel the sun light
but it feels barely there.
I'm still here in the shadow
and still I'm waiting for you to find me.

I remember the promises that we have made
and the times that they shattered to the ground.
I'm amazed at what just one year
can do to change us both.
But in the end I still am here
and I'm still waiting for someone
to bring me toward the light.

"I will give you my strength and my will to live strong."

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Joyce Johnson
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1 posted 07-17-2006 05:13 PM       View Profile for Joyce Johnson   Email Joyce Johnson   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Joyce Johnson

This heart breaking Honey, but i'll have to tell you what I told my children.  Don't wait for someone else to bring you happiness.  That's your job.  Love, Joyce
rhia_5779
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2 posted 07-17-2006 08:46 PM       View Profile for rhia_5779   Email rhia_5779   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for rhia_5779

i liked it but i think the sorta kind threw me off
midnightblues
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3 posted 07-18-2006 09:26 AM       View Profile for midnightblues   Email midnightblues   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit midnightblues's Home Page   View IP for midnightblues

Hmm some days I feel like this too..

Love,
MiCheLLe

If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues

Lighthousebob
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4 posted 07-23-2006 09:34 PM       View Profile for Lighthousebob   Email Lighthousebob   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Lighthousebob's Home Page   View IP for Lighthousebob

S.P.

I think that you portrayed the mood of being melancholy very well here in your poem.

Enjoyed reading and God bless.

-Bob
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