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2 Summer Haiku

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kitkat
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1.
twinkles upon grass
mysteriously we watch
dance of the firefly

2.
~on silken threads~
creepy little bugger
makes me shiver
Kathy Hyslopİ july12,2006

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kitkat:  Nice work on the haikus!

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Kathy,


Your haikus presented a real nice mixture of mysterious and creepy.

I don't have fireflies where I live, but I sure do have a bunch of spiders. Smiles.


Enjoyed reading both of your haikus.

-Bob


Note: I wrote one here also that I think might compliment your haiku called "Hippodamia Convergens."

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Thanks Betty and Bob for taking the time to read

I haven't written in a long time but  felt the need today.

See ya round

Kathy
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Very nice.  I see you have used two versions of the haiku.  We learn so much in this forum.  I just was back in Iowa for a family reunion and I was so excited about their fireflies.  They wre just thick.  I wanted to package them up and bring some home with me.  Thanks for the nice verses.  Joyce
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