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jody5
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since 2005-12-21
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0 posted 2006-07-06 07:19 PM




I looked at him

Who wanted to be my friend

Let him release his stress

After dumping his anger,

Love,  jealously and resentment

He was empty now....

Wanting to control my behavior

Make his views my views

I told him I agreed to disagree

I didn't care what others thought

Or said about me in judgment

They're opinion doesn't mean

I am  who they believe me to be.

I am only accountable to God

He is the only one that knows

My mind,  heart, and spirit.

He knows the purity of my Heart

He made me this way.

I praise him for giving me the

The fruits of the spirit

my song on the Christian way of life

[This message has been edited by jody5 (07-07-2006 05:33 PM).]

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Lighthousebob
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1 posted 2006-07-07 02:25 PM


jody5,

Smiles. Welcome to this side of Passions. It's nice to see you over here as well.

Smiles. For some reason, it seems that I read your poem twice, but, hey, any good poem deserves at least a second reading.

In your poem, I really liked how you expressed that you held true to your beliefs, your Faith, and to who you are as a Christian.

Again, Welcome, I enjoyed reading your poem, and God bless.

-Bob

jody5
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2 posted 2006-07-07 05:39 PM


Thank You Bob for your kindness.  I typed it last night when my back was out. When I get over tired I make mistakes due to my health problems.
songbird was trying to show me how to cut and paste and I guess I did it all right.  Smiles   Eventually I shall learn.


Lighthousebob
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3 posted 2006-07-07 06:59 PM


jody5,

You Done Good, Sister.

... and I'm so sorry about your back condition. I do appreciate even more,now, the effort it must take you to post here.

Thank you, my friend.

God bless.

-Bob

Joyce Johnson
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4 posted 2006-07-07 08:47 PM


Glad to read you here.  I am just back from a long trip and thick headed.  I will be making more intelligent comments on your next poem.  Love, Joyce
jody5
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5 posted 2006-07-07 09:37 PM


Thank you Bob I woke up on the wrong side of the bed. You fixed that mess I made last night.  I am not to excited about that poem.  Thank you Joyce for Posting.  I guess I will let others be the judge.  I also think I posted some poems in the wrong places.    


pegasus111
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6 posted 2006-07-09 07:32 PM


good to see you here in the corner. nothing like people who try to mould us in their image to get our backs up ( or, out as the case may be ).....

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost



jody5
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7 posted 2006-07-10 02:19 AM


Thank You pagasus111 Thats just how I feel.

Hugs Kimberly


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