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0 posted 2006-06-25 09:39 PM


I don’t want to accept the fact, that we are no longer one,
That somebody else is holding you today, and making you smile like I use to,
These thoughts are making me weary, and driving me a little crazy,
I can’t say sorry enough, while trying to control these emotions everyday,
It’s too late for me to do the right things, to show you I won’t do it anymore,
Anything that I could do now, I would do, to let you know how sorry I am,

If my love could be your shadow, each minute I wish for the sun to shine,
I will never leave your side again, this is my promise,
Baby, I know my problems, but you got to stick with me,
When you come around me now, you are cautious, as if you never knew me at all,
Please tell me how do I go on without you here, but I must accept the fact that you are gone,
Someone else has the pleasure, what has now become my pain.


I speak insanity. I write fantasy. I sleep reality.

© Copyright 2006 Ronil B Tataria - All Rights Reserved
Lighthousebob
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1 posted 2006-06-28 12:52 PM


Your poem here seems very honest and very personal.

God bless.

-Bob

midnightblues
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2 posted 2006-06-29 12:46 PM


Sober..

Love,
MiCheLLe

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jody5
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3 posted 2006-07-06 08:04 PM


Loves cut hurts sometimes, But you will make it through and God will give you somhthing better in his time.... great poem.

Hugs Kimberly


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