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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. 
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the geese pass by wings beat in vee-formation~ lone kite on breeze |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
 outstanding! |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Nice mind picture. Joyce |
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skyshine
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058Beneath the northern stars |
Beautiful!  ~sky I hope someday you get the chance to live like you were dying.... |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
Dennis, I can see the natural beauty here as expressed in your haiku. The association here between the geese and the kite is very easy on the mind and easy to visualize. God bless, -Bob |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Oh, now this is really nice. Thankyou for sharing. I love to hear the geese call in night flight ... don't you?  hugs, Chris Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance. |
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