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Trillium
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0 posted 2006-05-21 04:43 PM





To Touch A Tree

Is there memory in a tree
About the way things used to be?
Does it remember how it grew,
A little seedling, soft and new,
Adding inches every year
To reach a higher atmosphere?
Then when it towers up in space,
With roots extruding from its base,
Does it perhaps, at times recall
The way it felt when it was small?

And do the rings we find inside
Reveal its age but also hide
The history of nature's route?
As this tree grew, there is no doubt
That it survived each weather change.
What forces met to rearrange
The forest where this tree was one
Of thousands, stretching for the sun?
To touch a tree, is made to feel,
There is a life form here, most real


Published by Iliad Press, 1996!




Betty Lou Hebert


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1 posted 2006-05-21 05:45 PM


Lovely poem, Betty.  i think a tree has a touch of God in its branches.  love, Joyce
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2 posted 2006-05-21 11:34 PM


Wow...if trees could talk.
Great write. Inspiring and thoughtful.
thanks for sharing.

picturegramic :)

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3 posted 2006-05-22 12:09 PM


Dear Joyce:  I do agree with you! Thanks.

Love
Betty Lou

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4 posted 2006-05-22 12:10 PM


picturegramic:  Thanks for commenting and glad you enjoyed this poem.

Betty Lou

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5 posted 2006-05-22 08:45 AM


Hello Betty,

I totally agree with Joyce, and thank God of course for the immense talent that flows through your hand

Love,
MiCheLLe

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6 posted 2006-05-22 10:00 PM


MiCheLLe:  Thanks you so much for your lovely compliment!

Love
Betty Lou

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7 posted 2006-05-23 09:49 AM


SweetSweetBettyLou~
You KNOW my love of all things of nature ... I smile as I recognize my feelings for the trees ... you should hear some of the conversations I've had with them~
(they do listen, ya' know ?)
(of course you do !)

*Huglets*
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8 posted 2006-05-23 02:24 PM


Dear Marge:  Of course trees listen!! There is always communication, if you take the time! So glad you enjoyed the poem and related to it, as I do!

Love
Betty Lou

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9 posted 2006-05-23 08:29 PM


awsome poem really enjoied it ^_^~

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10 posted 2006-05-23 10:01 PM


Fabiani:  Thanks for commenting!

Betty Lou

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11 posted 2006-05-27 01:57 PM


I liked this poem about trees....and trees do have a touch of God in them, as Joyce said....since, after all, only God can make a tree.

~sky

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12 posted 2006-05-27 06:53 PM


Sky:  Thanks for your comments and I do agree with you!

Betty Lou

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13 posted 2006-05-29 02:56 PM


Trillium,

It was real real nice to read your poetry here again. By no means am I a tree expert, but I do think that one can tell a lot about what the weather was like, if there was a forest fire, if there was a drought, etc. etc. and can keep a kind of diary of time by looking at the rings of a tree... so, in a way, I do think and agree with your poem that trees can and do communicate their feelings, what they've experienced, what they were like when they were young, and a life outside of our own life. Enjoyed reading and God bless.

-Bob

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14 posted 2006-05-29 09:50 PM


Lovely!!  I adore trees. As a matter of fact, I hug our pussywillow tree each year when it comes into bloom. I tell it "thankyou" and "I'm so glad that you made it through the winter." Sounds silly, but oh well.
hugs, Chris

Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance.
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15 posted 2006-05-31 12:05 PM


Lighthouse Bob:  How nice to hear from you and what you say is so true.  There is always a sense of history in looking at a tree and especially its rings when it is cut down.

Nice to have you posting here again.

Betty Lou

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16 posted 2006-05-31 12:10 PM


Chris:  I don't think that is silly at all!
Trees deserve our affection and appreciation! Thanks for your comments.

Betty Lou

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17 posted 2006-06-03 05:51 PM


Hello Trillium. Did you get your name from The Hitch-hikers guide?

I love this-it reminds me of when my son was about 3 years old, we were out walking, and he ran up to a tree in the woods, wrapped his arms around it, and said 'oh, mother.' I was gob-smacked.

Trees are as magical as the sky, aren't they? There's a whole world under every canopy.

Great read, thanks!

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18 posted 2006-06-03 07:10 PM


kif kif:  Thanks for your comments! Welcome to the site also. Hope you enjoy it!

I took my name from the trilliums that grow in our woods, every spring. They are a favorite of mine.

What a special moment for you and your little son!  Children sense things we don't lots of times!

Betty Lou

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19 posted 2006-06-24 09:03 AM


Dear Betty Lou

Trees are our 'life force'!!!  Without them this planet of ours would be desolate!!!  Only if man would 'remember' this.......trees do have 'feelings'.......

Loved this poem!

Love Verbena xo


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20 posted 2006-06-24 03:34 PM


Dear Verbena:  What a nice surprise to see you posting a reply to this poem. It's been awhile and I've missed you!

Love
Betty Lou

Betty Lou Hebert

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