Hello, Alone In The Dark.
Haha! a delightful, image-packed romp into marital bliss, and it is bliss, by the warmth in your tone.
Plus, you've captured the simplicity of the sportsman very well with your stucture, and easy flow.
(Trillium brought up an interesting point-I'm quite into gender specific writing...what you've done here is quite rude, although loving. You've subjectified your husband, like you would consider your dog! As a woman, I'm giggling, yet I can't help think I'd be blah blahing about subjegation if it were a man's poem about his wife! Yet, on 3rd reading, you have used the words "hunter" and "someone", so I'll let it go, although to be perfect in my li'l opinion, I'd like to hear him, as well as see him.)
definitely one for the bothy. Thanks for the read.