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Green Buds (haiku)

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Dennis L. White
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green buds
attract the robin~
an empty feeder
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1 posted 05-18-2006 11:14 AM       View Profile for Joyce Johnson   Email Joyce Johnson   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Joyce Johnson

Nice Dennis.  I am not acquainted with this version of the haiku.  I've only seen the five, seven, five examples.  Joyce
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2 posted 05-20-2006 04:35 PM       View Profile for Dennis L. White   Email Dennis L. White   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dennis L. White

Hi Joyce, This is more contemporary Haiku. Rule of thumb is 5-7-5 syllables or less to convey the word picture. Thanks for your comment. Dennis :^)
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3 posted 05-22-2006 12:39 AM       View Profile for picturegramic   Email picturegramic   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for picturegramic

I also thought it had to be 5-7-5 but
you did paint the picture
I like to write in haiku because I find I don't have much time and that keeps me writing. thanks for sharing,

picturegramic :)

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Dennis~
This is truly a beaut~

Thank you for showing up and sharing~
*Huglets*
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Enjoyable haiku I enjoy the style and enjoyed yours.
thanks for sharing,

picturegramic :)

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Lovely picture....

~sky

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Dennis,

Empty-nest syndrome or should I say "feeder" can certainly have its effects on our observing them.... Sigh. But, don't fret, my friend, they'll be Home when the food runs low. Smiles.

-Bob
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8 posted 07-12-2006 09:49 AM       View Profile for kitkat   Email kitkat   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for kitkat

Nicely done. I always have enjoyed haiku as it describes so much with so little

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Nice work Dennis!

Betty Lou

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