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aries_luv_ppl
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since 2001-09-20
Posts 1448
Universal Mind

0 posted 2006-05-12 06:24 PM


Conflict Desires

Ever since when I was young,
I fell in love
With Chinese ancient palace.
My eyes adored your embroidery;
I wished to be
Dancer just like you.
I was mesmerized by your voice:
Your song was like mild whispers,
From the queen of birds.
My mouth could not keep shut
Because of your rice.
Rice seems to be plain,
But hard to cook till just right.
You seemed know all inside out,
From tender touch
To wisdom talk.

Who would not want to have you,
Heartily thinking I will never be.

I, I move my way with heavy sole.
I...(I) would like to be my own boss.
I hate to do housework,
And I am least to eat slow.
She is tender; I am careless (and forgetful)
She...(she) know all books--but I hate books.
I want to be center of attention.
I want to be esteem highly--but I don't have much knowledge.
It seems there is little that I am interested in,
Except for competing for others to recognize...me.
Low self-esteem developed into identity lost.
What a frightful dream that I want awake.

Please wake me up...

(c) May 12, 2006 Vivian So aka. Eliza Simmons

Eliza Simmons
~Yesterday insult, today gain.

© Copyright 2006 Eliza Simmons - All Rights Reserved
midnightblues
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since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597
Singapore
1 posted 2006-05-13 09:43 AM


Very ethereal, I enjoyed reading this!

Love,
MiCheLLe

If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues

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