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zt88
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0 posted 2006-04-29 12:58 PM



The Chance

The chance came, and my back was turned
I never had a clue
That the feelings you had for me were the same I shared for you

My chance is now gone, and those days are far past
But still I thank God every night that you have found happiness at last

He is not me, but puts that beautiful smile on your face
And that alone brightens my most gloomy of days…

© Copyright 2006 zt88 - All Rights Reserved
Joyce Johnson
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Member Rara Avis
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1 posted 2006-04-29 02:11 AM


Welcome to our Corner.  I enjoyed reading your poem.  Joyce
zt88
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2 posted 2006-04-29 02:16 AM


Thank you so much...

Out of all the poetry forums I looked over, this one seems to actually stick to the real meaning of poetry, and not just contests and money prizes.

Very glad to be here. ZT.

midnightblues
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3 posted 2006-04-29 12:32 PM


Hi there,

Bittersweet and moving read..
Looking forward to more of your works

Love,
MiCheLLe

If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues

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4 posted 2006-04-29 03:05 PM


ZT:  Welcome to PIP and hope you have a great time here. Liked your poem!!

Betty Lou (Trillium)

Betty Lou Hebert

Fabiani
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since 2006-05-12
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5 posted 2006-05-13 09:36 PM


i like this poem alot i can relate with the sacrifice of  yourself for another persons happiness
picturegramic
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6 posted 2006-05-22 12:42 PM


What I liked about this poem was wanting the happiness of another more than their own, now that is true love.
Nicely done and enjoyed.

picturegramic :)

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