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untitled.. actually I couldn't come up with one
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midnightblues Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597Singapore 
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The earthly issues beckon Cloaked in the Devil's deceit I've fallen once too many Into the trap of guilt and sins You will heal me And send me a rainbow after this storm In the midst of my darkest fears All my bitter tears I've learnt to come and rest in You I feel Your spirit in the wind Your love has washed away my sins Touched by Your sacrifice I believe that I'll survive Jesus I know you are God Draw me closer to You everyday In You I will triumph For You I will live To Your Kingdom I belong ------------------------ God is good all the time! Love, MiCheLLe If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Very nice, Michelle. Worthy of a name. Love, Joyce |
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midnightblues Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597Singapore |
Thank you Joyce  Love, MiCheLLe If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Michelle~ Such a moving write ... and I can only suggest a piece of a line from your beautifully prayerful piece as the title - Draw Me Closer I adore this beauty~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
MiCheLle: I love this poem! Beautiful! The title that comes to me is "Send Me a Rainbow! Love Betty Lou Betty Lou Hebert |
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SPIRIT Senior Member
since 2002-12-29
Posts 1745California Desert |
This is a beauty, but until it is titled it is unfinished. The first suggestion you got was super, I feel that it needs a 'God' title. Saving Grace, My Redeemer you really have a lot of options...hope you find one soon to your liking. Dinah |
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SPIRIT Senior Member
since 2002-12-29
Posts 1745California Desert |
This is a beauty, but until it is titled it is unfinished. The first suggestion you got was super, I feel that it needs a 'God' title. Saving Grace, My Redeemer you really have a lot of options...hope you find one soon to your liking. Dinah |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
your faith will guide you to a title. nicely done the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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