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the_hoodANDsheild
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since 2006-03-08
Posts 25
Canada

0 posted 2006-03-31 09:41 PM


I sit here alone
As I watch the glass cry

Grey stormy clouds encircle
As I watch the glass cry

Deep low rumbles from heaven explode
As I watch the glass cry

Thinking about a lost love
As I watch the glass cry

Avoiding the problems of life
As I watch the glass cry

Thinking about a hazy future
As I watch the glass cry

Playing memories like an old movie
As I watch the glass cry

And now I know why
The glass cries.


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midnightblues
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since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597
Singapore
1 posted 2006-04-01 05:39 AM


Hi there,

What a refreshing approach to expression, now I know why the glass cries

WELCOME TO PASSIONS!

Love,
MiCheLLe

If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues

Joyce Johnson
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Member Rara Avis
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912
Washington State
2 posted 2006-04-01 10:51 AM


What a novel description of rain and its
effect on emotions.  Welcome.  Joyce

mosis
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since 2006-03-31
Posts 7
Ontario
3 posted 2006-04-01 01:41 PM


I really liked your poem - it was very interesting

the_hoodANDsheild
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since 2006-03-08
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Canada
4 posted 2006-04-01 04:38 PM


Thankyou very much for your input
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