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longte
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since 2005-04-06
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Australia

0 posted 2006-02-21 04:31 AM


Lovely
Unbroken
Spirited and free
Blooming into womanhood
Nearly in her teens
Trusted one too many
Father’s rabid lust
Fairytales and childhood
Lie shattered in the dust

Blame
Insidious
Offered on a plate
Can’t escape reality
Knows it’s much too late
Told too many times
It is all her fault
Cycle has been started
Now it cannot halt

Inner child
Fractured
Buried desperately
Adult world hurting
Almost is thirteen
Relationships with others
Burying the pain
Trust
a false commodity
Nothing there to gain

Once
Childish
Seeking hard to learn
Now
Bitter
Adult rages burn
Schooling was so easy
Now it is no use
Nearly fourteen
Father stops abuse

Runs
Desperate
Seeking a new life
Drugs
Homelessness
Endless foetid strife
Standing on the corner
All is as it seems
Miniskirt
Thigh high boots
Selling rented dreams
..
.
Next time you pass by sneering, remember why most of them are there
Remember that someone probably knew about the abuse
Remember that they said nothing
Remember the result of that
..
.

Live It

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FNG
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since 2006-02-07
Posts 477

1 posted 2006-02-21 04:39 AM


A sad poem.

But very true.

Enjoyed it very much.

longte
Member
since 2005-04-06
Posts 199
Australia
2 posted 2006-02-21 04:41 AM


Sometimes there is little beauty in truth
..
.

FNG
Member
since 2006-02-07
Posts 477

3 posted 2006-02-22 07:17 AM


Yes, i agree. sad but beautiful.
midnightblues
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since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597
Singapore
4 posted 2006-02-22 09:14 AM


Hi there,

Your straightforward style in writing evoked much emotions in me, thanks for sharing

Love,
MiCheLLe

If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues

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