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desert-spike
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0 posted 2006-02-19 03:31 PM



Breathless


I look at her face
She is the sun,
My true and only one
Her smile is the snake
I am her prey to take
Her aura is the light, silver fires burning bright
Her eyes are the moon, and being with her will never be too soon
Her love is the way, and what more can I say,
Before her, in her presence I stand defenseless,
naked and breathless

© Copyright 2006 Gabriel T. Unbehaun - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2006-02-20 08:47 AM


Gabe~
breathless indeed~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

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desert-spike
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2 posted 2006-02-20 02:14 PM


thankya kindly.
tracie66
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3 posted 2006-02-21 02:23 AM


tis just beautiful
~hugs~
Tracie

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe
                        — W. E. Channing



FNG
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4 posted 2006-02-21 04:30 AM


Enjoyed your poem.


midnightblues
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5 posted 2006-02-22 09:08 AM


Hi Gabe,

This is lovely, I love the imagery
Thanks for sharing!

Love,
MiCheLLe

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