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FNG
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0 posted 2006-02-09 05:46 AM


Forgive me for holding on so dear....
To a treasure that will never reappear...

You said I fiddled...
Perhaps...
My tears cry for me....

I coax my heart to the way it used to be, before you appear...
Alone, stoned and still...
But it would not be...

My heart swell in me...
The well of tears ease...

If there's no place on earth for us to meet...
See you in heaven when our meek lives cease...

Till then....remember me.....

© Copyright 2006 Danielle Tan - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2006-02-09 11:40 AM


Welcome to PIP!  I was surprised to find this gem in here, but it certainly does express feeling.  Looking forward to more.

   Rae

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2 posted 2006-02-09 03:49 PM


FNG~
A big WELCOME to PiP~

You've expressed your feelings well~

Enjoy your stay and please share more~

We've got many forums for you to deposit another gem in for us all to read and respond to~

You'll like being part of this wonderful circle of poetic friends~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

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3 posted 2006-02-09 09:19 PM


This is gorgeous -- what a heart-twister!

If I were you, I'd ask an administrator to move it into the Open forum, where everybody will see it...because a poem like this one should be seen.

My experience has been that our admins are happy to help out with those things, if you decide to do it. Either way, I'm glad I dropped in here.

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4 posted 2006-02-11 06:09 AM


Welcome to Passions, Poet.  
Please, check your Email for a special greeting!


FNG
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5 posted 2006-02-11 06:16 AM


Hi all,

Thanks for your comments!

Starting to feel at home already

Lots to learn and share with so many wonderful poets here.

Cheers
FNG

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