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IntoTheRain
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since 2006-01-29
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Westwood, CA

0 posted 2006-02-06 02:19 PM


Assuredly I have always hoped
To love that which has been given to me
The lunar pull
Courses winding to find
The deep and the depthless

This current is a meaning
A weightless imperfect knowing
The tracing of the roots will bind you
In a hall of liquid mirrors
A wind to light the way

What I carry is one with this
The painting locked away
In a room of my heart
The drifting nocturne
Surreal as are the colors

The tides are an ebbing
The fading an imperfect merging
Where the chorus of the many
Is merely an exhale
In the midst of the most lovely of dreams


© Copyright 2006 Rob Sunderland - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2006-02-07 01:27 AM


completely blown away, every line is like a mantra.  
midnightblues
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2 posted 2006-02-08 12:31 PM


Hi Rob,

I'm completely in love with this poem

What I carry is one with this
The painting locked away
In a room of my heart
The drifting nocturne
Surreal as are the colors


'Surreal': my favourite expression!

Love,
MiCheLLe

If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues

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3 posted 2006-02-08 02:20 PM



Very pleasant read, Rob~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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Enchantress
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Canada eh.
4 posted 2006-02-08 04:32 PM


Excellent...very much enjoyed.
Hugs~Nancy

In the midst of winter,
I found there lives within me..
An invincible summer.

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