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IntoTheRain
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0 posted 2006-01-29 02:39 PM


This antiquated sadness
Has been but a long eon passing,
An age of requiems
A season of changes
The wisdom of a passive flame.
The water a window
Her fingertips a current
My hopes a stain of color,
The rippling uncertainty
Love, refracted light caught
A hazel insinuation
The colors of the glass

© Copyright 2006 Rob Sunderland - All Rights Reserved
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Canada eh.
1 posted 2006-01-29 03:19 PM


Well done Rob~Much enjoyed.
Hugs~Nancy

In the midst of winter,
I found there lives within me..
An invincible summer.

tracie66
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2 posted 2006-01-31 12:58 PM


WOW!
enjoyed very much, thanks

~hugs~
Tracie

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe
                        — W. E. Channing



Marge Tindal
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3 posted 2006-01-31 10:28 AM


Rob~

'The water a window
Her fingertips a current
My hopes a stain of color,
The rippling uncertainty
Love, refracted light caught'


I greatly enjoyed the art of your imagery~

I adore the word 'refracted' ...
did this one once upon a long-ago ...
you might enjoy it -
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*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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midnightblues
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4 posted 2006-01-31 12:03 PM


Hi Rob,

I love the poignant beauty in your writing hope to see more of your works!

Love,
MiCheLLe

If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues

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5 posted 2006-02-10 10:58 PM


Hold on to the red, the yellow
because love is a rainbow
and after red and yellow
comes the green, then blue.

I don't know, that's just the last verse.
It started here.
When the rest is written, it's yours.

~~(¸¸¸¸ºº>   ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº>  ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº>    ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº>
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Martie
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6 posted 2006-02-24 01:36 PM


I can see why this inspired Ed...it's wonderful!
Sunshine
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7 posted 2006-02-25 06:38 AM



Yes, dittoing Martie all the way...




Klassy Lassy
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8 posted 2006-02-25 06:56 AM


love refracted... beautiful...rainbows!

brings to mind the phrase "love is relected in love"  

~ Karen ~

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