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amepoesie Member
since 2006-01-19
Posts 63Canada |
I reviewed my tanka. Here it is! Impatient lights dance In the sky bringing visions Of loving shimmers… Then I wake up, merrily And I kiss night’s gorgeous hair. Ame et Poésie |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Ame~ And dear poetess ...  it's only PERFECT~Fantasmatical !!! I like it ... like it ... like it~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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amepoesie Member
since 2006-01-19
Posts 63Canada |
Thanks a lot! I don't know if it is perfect, but I love it. Here are some I wrote last night and today... The spheres are music. The grassy slopes hush the wind— Through the parting clouds, They see life’s unsurpassed friend And they laugh with the moonbeam. the lark flies away forsaking her hatchling nest never to come back; timeless splendour of being when freedom makes us pure, real. subserviently the storm regains her balance— nature has spoken and the eyes have seen beauty shining like dazzling treasures. Ame et Poésie |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Ame~ What fun ! They are all lovely ... and *right on* the mark~ See ... I said they could become *addictive* ...  *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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amepoesie Member
since 2006-01-19
Posts 63Canada |
Yes, they definitely are! Before, I used to be stuck with free verse, but when you deal with spiritual subjects, it may be a little annoying after a while. Those short poems say it all, with a few words, and that's enough. Ame et Poésie |
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